Bikinis and Commas!©
by Rennie
June 2004
I want to tell you a little story about an itsy bitsy teeny weeny yellow
polka dot bikini!
A friend and I were watching TV one evening, and a commercial came on that was
playing that song. It showed a picture of a bikini that was yellow with pink
polka dots. My friend said, "Hey! That bikini doesn't have yellow polka dots!" I
thought for a minute and said, "Yes, but the song must be saying, 'yellow COMMA
polka dot bikini.'"
The bikini was yellow.
The bikini had polka dots.
Two separate items there. Therefore, a comma would be in order.
Now, if the bikini had had yellow polka dots, there would be no comma because
"yellow" would be building on "polka dots." A yellow polka dot bikini is very
different from a yellow, polka dot bikini. Make sense?!
This is a difficult concept for everyone! Even though I think I understand it, I
still often have to stop and scratch my head! ;)